I believe her hips should be more thin at least in one and half times :) No matter... Thats a great sketch. Most of all I admire your artwork with her right hand holding a tray, outlines so easy and believable, like a real hand! And the work with her upper part of a body - shoulders, chest and waist just beautiful. If only her pelvis was not so wide... The catchlights in her eyes is very simple and remarkable detail, I think I'll take advantage for my future worx. :)

um I really think it's pretty